I see where you're going with this!
Nice track I like this and see where you're going with this, I did have a couple of gripes with it and I'll point them out to you so you know what improvements if any you need to made with it!
Okay those really bassy strings that play throughout the track I found to be pretty repetetive sorry man! they need to diversify a bit! the melodies that come in with the other stings I really liked! and yo uhad some kick ass beats in this track
also I think there's a bit of audio confusion kicking in with those bassy strings, they seem to overlap a little too much with the other sounds and causes what I would describe as a kind of distortion
Other than that I can see this as a good loop, I just had those slight probs with it, this isn't quite as good as the other tracks of yours but i liked it none the less
Don't want to be too critical so don't take this too badly just wanted to point out what i thought were some bad points, so you can improve on them
Peace Out!
Stealth