Nicely done
Cool :) I'm gonna have to watch hellraise again me thinks! I've not seen it in a while!
I like what you've done with this, don't hear a lot of stuff like this anymore! I think you could have done with a few more samples in there, but meh that's just me, I like the guitar riff that you use in this as the opener after the vocal intro
Peace Out!
Stealth
i dont have a lot of samples on my pc most of them are drums but i do have a few of my own guitar recordings with i chop and change and mess around with and the intro was one though i havnt got round to using it untill now.
And thanks dude
Nicely done and ur singng isn't bad!
Nicely done man! I really like the accompanying acoustic guitar riff to this that was pretty sweet man, I wish I had an acoustic aswell oh wells! damnit!
Now for the song, the song was great :) I can't fault it! yeah keep with your song writing that was sweet
Now for the singing, you say your bad! but man you really aren't so don't be so harsh on yourself man!
Pull yourself together damnit! lol XD
All in all this was a great submission, keep with it!
Peace Out!
if you can spare a minute check out some of my audio please review too!
Thanks
Stealth
lol I still think I'm a bad singer.
But I'm glad you like the song dude!
Thanks for the review.
Nice, this is different too!
Wow I've not heard much violin here on NG! makes a nice change, Okay well I like the melody you had going on with that violin, and was accompanied very nicely with that...was it a flute? and the percussion too, which wasn't overdone, was used in moderation so thumbs up there
I did however find this tune to be a little repetetive, but that's no biggie
I'll give you 5/5 anywhoo
I can't say I'm familiar with the software you mentioned, if you're interested in other aspects of music making, you might wanna check out Fruity Loops! Just as a suggestion mind!
Hope to hear more tunes coming from you soon!
Keep at it man!
Come check by my stuff too, see what you think!
Peace Out!
Stealth
Thank you for the kind words. I have a few more unique songs coming soon!
Man this is freaking amazing
Oh Man! Wow I take my hat off to you, I can't believe you've got such a low score on this, only 2.5, I'll do my best to put that right.
Well Starts off with the synths, very nicely done too! then the beats kick in, and I'm thinking erm... sounds more like hip-hop but I'm still digging it and I'm kinda thinking, this track really needs some guitar...
...But wait, that major kick ass riff kicks in, and I'm loving it! was that a sample?
Cos man regardless sample or live guitar, that was bad ass!
I'm still not certain this is Heavy metal, but man I absolutely freaking loved this track and I just can't believe it's done so badly! this is the first review for it, and you got an abismal score for it!
Well man keep doing what you're doing cos man you're good
Peace Out!
Stealth
Keep on at it man!
Hey dude well I'm back, said I'd return, and see you're not using midi anymore, good one! Ok can I ask are you using Fruity Loops now? cos I tell you man, I have started using it too and well, if it's what you're using now, I take my hat off to you, takes a while to get to grips with it!
Okay I'll stop babbling on with the review! well it's a good start, a good "new beginning"! I would almost say that this was more ambient, I don't quite feel it's techno, but that's no biggy, you got a good melody going on in this, it is a bit repetetive, but I'll give you a break, you're new to it! I like the use of that sound, I don't know what it's called (i was gonna try and describe it, instead it just reminds me of a rota blade on a helicopter lol) I liked that, it went well with the melody, now i've heard this through a few times now! and i can hear more occurring, i think i can count at least 3 layers, if that's the case then, well they all tie in really well
I would say, as a suggestion, perhaps add some more beats to this track and make them a little more prominent, though not too prominent, just enough to lift the track!
So anyway I'm in a good mood, and see you're trying! so gonna give you 5/5
Hit me back if you can spare a few minutes, if you could, could you review 1 or both of my latest submissions?
Thanks Man!
Peace Out!
Stealth
NO, im still using acid pro. Some peopl tell me thats what pros use, thats why im using it. I got the hang of it real quick though, for a new program and all. I chose techno because i asked someone what did it sound like, and thats what they told me. Im not good at telling what type of music is what. I used 4 layers, and also if you have bass in your speakers, it would sound alot better, trust me. And yes i will go check out your music.
Man this is tight
Yo Mr DJBotony, this is sweet! the lyrics were tight, very, very well crafted, it was a bit short too, but hey, love the piano melody on this that was cool :) the beats were sweet too! and everything flows very nicely
Man this is cool I really liked this, you're getting a 5 for sure
Hit me back man!
Peace Out!
Stealth
Thanks man. I know it's short. It's just a little sumthin sumthin fo Reven. And I know it sucks as a freestyle, but it's been a while since I've done work like this. Anywayz, thanks fo the review.
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Sorry man!
Oh man! what can I say, you've not done a great deal with this track! it is really basic, though you haven't made it out to be anything but!
Man if you've got Fruity Loops (even just the demo version)and you have the time, patience and desire to make some music, go and experiment with it for a while
I hope you've not been put off with the idea of making any more music, give it a try man!
Thanks for reviewing mine too btw
Peace Out!
Stealth
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Nicely done i really liked this
Wow I really liked this, and so did my speakers, the only suggestion I would make, would be to turn the melodies volume down just a tad, turn your beats up a little more just to give it that oomph, the bass on this was awesome and I loved those melodies, I think those suggestions would be the only ones I can think of for you for when you plan to take this beyond being a demo
all in all this was really good!
Peace Out!
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