Well it's not all that bad!!!
I liked this, cool sounding melodies in there, the bass was cool, the Drums were all fine, and the effect you used on "is that the snare?" lol was cool
you're offering a bit of variety too, I heard your car commercial track aswell and thought that was sweet too!
yeah man keep banging ou those tunes, I'll be checking in on you from time to time lol
Peace Out!
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Stealth